Corona Virus is becoming a big problem for todays' Society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as govenrments losing a big part of budget. While COVID 19 is treating the globe from polluting and other affects of humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In modern times , the issue of Corona virus has become highly controversial. There are those who say they COVID-19 in today's society is becoming serious problems for thousands of people lives and damage for governments to lose a significant part of budget, however others believe that Corona virus can help to deliverance from pollutions and greenhouse affects and other serious affects of humanity. In this essay i will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there are a wide range of reasons why people believe that governments and municipalities are wasting huge amount of money so as to support and treat people who are suffering this virus. Perhaps the main reason why people think that this idea is that it can avoid spreading of this around the world. A good illustration of this is that in China nowadays government are spending enough money and providing necessary medical protections as masks, tablet and disinfection sources for people's health and lives. As a result , patients strongly hope and are trying to easily recover from Corona virus.A further in favour of COVID-19 that becoming a big problem in today's society is that it is becoming negative effect for some businesses such as bars, restaurants nightclubs. As a result government are losing a lot of tax money from them.
Despite these arguments, Many people feel that this virus can be useful and beneficial way to clean our atmosphere and nature. The primary reason supporting this idea is that it can reduce cars in roads and some factories which are producing emissions and exhausting fumes. If the amount of gases such as carbon dioxide in our atmosphere decrease , it'll be helpful to treat the globe and not put pressure on nature. Secondly, this can led to the protection of many species of animals and plants. If people don't go out and hunt some animal, they will not be afraid of traps and even think about dangerous situations which are happened by people.
In conclusion, this is a topic which is very relevant to modern society and each individuals. If we look at both sides of the argument, it is clear that we all should attempt together to struggle with dangerous Corona virus and protect ourselves for our family from its infections and in addition, as much as possible we should aid people with motivational charities and epecially governments to avoid spreading of COVID-19 around the globalised world.
Shoberdiyov Shokhrukh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02926829268 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70068605853 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539024390244 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.1747660697 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.466666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318302924414 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837423875421 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105415233197 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15306436705 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134307821553 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.