Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties,
birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money.
Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss.
ven though minority believes that it is essential to spend colossal amounts of funds by organizing grand functions, majority vocalizes that it is sheer wastage of precious funds. While some people want to enjoy special moments of their lives by inviting all their relatives and by holding great parties, I cogitate that all these extravagant expenditure is unproductive.
Huge expenditure has become integral part of every function in society. Since people are now more blessed with prosperity, thus they have whims to take pleasure of every important occasion. Consequently, they organise grand celebrations and spend lavishly to entertain themselves and their relatives. Also it is biased to overlook the fact presented by Times Magazine that an average Indian spend almost lion share of his entire life's savings in wedding celebration just to entertain guests However, I believe that excess expenditure just for enjoyments of others are not justifiable.
On the other hand, people lavishly spend money on several occasion which do not have any productive benefit for them. To show-off their own wealth and to receive appraisal from society, they even sell their property and take heft loans from banks. As a result, these expenditure do not guarantee any further economic benefits and sometimes, it leads to financial crisis. To exemplify, as per the report documented by World Bank that due to the culture of extravagant expenditure in wedding countless entrepreneurs are facing bankruptcy in Indian. Therefore, I believe that hefty amounts of expenditure to celebrate some special occasions is unwise decision as it overburdens individuals with excess liabilities.
In conclusion, although people have dire desires to enjoy their celebration, it often put adverse effect on their financial positions.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ven
ven though minority believes that it is ess...
^^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...tertain themselves and their relatives. Also it is biased to overlook the fact prese...
^^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: 'several occasions'.
Suggestion: several occasions
...er hand, people lavishly spend money on several occasion which do not have any productive benefi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this expenditure' or 'these expenditures'?
Suggestion: this expenditure; these expenditures
...ake heft loans from banks. As a result, these expenditure do not guarantee any further economic b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53405017921 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91784451714 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627240143369 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0162234308 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160453050826 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532886237857 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514862823869 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865263401199 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424546474651 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ven
ven though minority believes that it is ess...
^^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...tertain themselves and their relatives. Also it is biased to overlook the fact prese...
^^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: 'several occasions'.
Suggestion: several occasions
...er hand, people lavishly spend money on several occasion which do not have any productive benefi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this expenditure' or 'these expenditures'?
Suggestion: this expenditure; these expenditures
...ake heft loans from banks. As a result, these expenditure do not guarantee any further economic b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53405017921 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91784451714 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627240143369 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0162234308 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160453050826 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532886237857 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514862823869 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865263401199 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424546474651 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.