The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons

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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons

The table gives information about eight different kinds of birds watched in Woodchuck County during two seasons winter and summer.

There are eight different species listed in the table all of them are not migratory birds except three are the Cardinals, Crows, and Woodpeckers. These species inhabit in Woodchuck County in both seasons winter and summer. It seems to me that they can adapt to climate’s changes and endure cold and hot weather. The rest of species are migratory birds. The Bluebirds, Mockingbirds, Orioles and Vireos are observed only in the summer. It seems to be that these types spend their breeding period during the summer in Woodchuck County. Contrary to above cited species, there is one type of birds are observed only in the winter is Juncos, perhaps it cannot tolerate the summer heat.

Generally, most kinds of birds that are observed in Woodchuck County are living in the summer. While, there are three types live there over the year. But, there is only one kind migrates to there in the winter.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...dchuck County are living in the summer. While, there are three types live there over ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9710982659 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35283548278 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514450867052 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.395772731 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201787059239 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778913035433 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734811270631 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161509156615 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738868725288 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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