You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
The most of the Nations are having a problem with their education and people who does not want to learn about what is happening in the world. Moreover, the young people are not showing interested to watch or read the news becoming ignorant and lazy.
Some years ago, people are used to buy a newspaper or watch TV everyday to understand the situation that each country are living and what is happening in our cities but nowadays, with all the evolution of the technology some people are not reading books or newspapers like before. They are starting to get informed by websites and social media which some of information are against the true. However, this way can make us to become less intelligent believing in fakes news.
In my opinion, the problem of young people are not reading or following the news is because they are tired to see traumatic situations that used to occur in our society. Actually, the news only shows to us this kind of terrible news because it is the way that they found to bring people to watch the news and try to make money but it not works. In addition, young people would start to follow the news when the journalists starts to innovate and make the news more attractive achieving all the ages and being impartial on their opinions.
In conclusion, the causes of young people are not interesting to follow this resources is because of the technology that arrived and they can get the information easily and quickly by their phones or computers that is a good solution to stop the Earth's pollution and cut the trees to make paper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...are used to buy a newspaper or watch TV everyday to understand the situation that each c...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ng people are not interesting to follow this resources is because of the technology ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64748201439 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44101260105 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503597122302 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3300859352 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.555555556 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223278295959 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092138418065 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354331033501 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136258625366 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00756949459464 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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