You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, many nations have a question in front of them that many of their young population is not aware about latest news. This is due to the fact that teenagers of 21st century neither follow news on TV nor read newspapers. The following paragraphs will explain the causes and their solutions to change the scenario.
Firstly, due to media’s representation of a particular case has dramatically changed over the years, its validation is always questioned by experts. Any news is just a hypothetical view of a journalist pictured and published from their imagination. This has led to various versions of information and indirectly causing less interest to catch any teenager’s eye. A better way is to scrutinize the information published by all the media which can be done under governments surveillance. This can in turn provide cases with genuine news and validated information so that people can rely on the author’s viewpoint.
Furthermore, articles which discuss issues about poverty, corruption and political parties have always been in limelight by media. Young people opine that these issues are already surfacing in the nation but nobody is discussing about the solution to resolve them. As a result, repetition of the same facts and figures which does not attract new generation people has deprived them from following news channels and reading newspapers. One good solution can be diversification about topics such as creating news based on business ideas, future entrepreneurs, development of infrastructure and facilities around the nation can really generate teenager’s viewership to greater extent.
To sum up, followers of news channels and newspapers have drastically fall amongst young population due to publication of fake and repetitive news over the years. In my view, if news is created based on authentic information as well as covers wide range on subjects, it will increase the popularity within the teenagers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
... of their young population is not aware about latest news. This is due to the fact that teen...
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Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...y all the media which can be done under governments surveillance. This can in turn provide ...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'fallen'.
Suggestion: fallen
...hannels and newspapers have drastically fall amongst young population due to publica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, then, well, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37254901961 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06534554117 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1415195057 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220938364064 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752487700655 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467385289572 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136553256039 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560680533081 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.