Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The preference of the manner of studying is different among varying pupils, some consider group study as more desirable, while others want to do their work solitary. In my opinion, both have their own pros and cons and a combination of them would work efficiently.
Predominantly, studying in groups is efficacious as there are more minds at work, thus better solutions could be derived through discussion. Along with that, children can clear their doubts from their peers without any hesitation of being insulted. Additionally, studying with friends proves to be effective as one does not feel low or bored, thus becoming more productive. For instance, a teenager who completes a topic in 4 hours by himself can do it in half the time when someone clears his queries simultaneously. Also, those who are lacking in a particular subject can have a better understanding from those who are good at it. However,group study becomes a bane when leisure activities exceed the actual work done.
Similarly, individual study has its own benefits, the preponderant one being that one can work according to one's comfort. One needs not compete with the speed of the group members and can work at one's own pace. Moreover, there are no distractions and the child can focus solely on his work. Furthermore, some students do not like their ideas to be discussed with others, thus preferring to study by themselves. Often, there is one or the other member who has the habit of procrastination, hence delay the work of the whole group. For instance, while completing a group assignment, the negligence of one person affects the overall performance.
I believe that the pros of both methods of study should be taken benefit of and it should be chosen as per the requirement of the topic. One the one hand, studying sincerely and avoiding unnecessary distractions while studying in a group can remove its biggest disadvantage. While on the other hand, the work requiring utmost concentration should be done individually.
Conclusively, one should not stick to a single manner of studying and inculcate the habit of studying both for deriving maximum advantage out of each.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 641, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , group
...g from those who are good at it. However,group study becomes a bane when leisure activ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ne being that one can work according to ones comfort. One needs not compete with the...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06442577031 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95477714379 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1544065614 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214953252943 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741293104165 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581637288921 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137557743228 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241125829104 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 641, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , group
...g from those who are good at it. However,group study becomes a bane when leisure activ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ne being that one can work according to ones comfort. One needs not compete with the...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06442577031 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95477714379 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1544065614 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214953252943 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741293104165 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581637288921 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137557743228 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241125829104 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.