The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors (in thousands) to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Version 1:
The given chart illustrates the figures of foreign visitors to three different holiday destinations in a European nation from 1987 to 2007.
As can be seen, the coast was the most interesting place, with the figure witnessing the highest number of visitors during this period, except in 2002, when the lakes overtook its leading position and became the most popular tourist attraction.
In 1987-2007, the number of visitors to the coast increased by varying degrees, and then it rose significantly until 2007 to reach its peak of 75,000. There was a dramatic rise in the figure for the lakes from 10,000 in 1987 to 40,000 in 1997, before hitting its peak of about 75,000 in 2002, followed by a sudden drop to 50,000 5 years later. By contrast, the number of overseas visitors to the mountains fluctuated between 20,000 and 30,000 from 1987 to 1997 and then rose slightly to 35,000 in 2007.
Version 2:
The line graph compares the number of foreign tourists to three tourist spots in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
Overall, the figure for the coast and the lakes increased by varying degrees, with the latter rising at a greater pace in 2002. It is clear that the coast was the most famous place for the visitors, the lakes came second and the mountains came last (with the smallest number of visitors between 1987 and 2007).
In 1987, the coast, the mountains and the lakes had about 40,000, 20,000 and 10,000 visitors respectively. It is noticeable that in 1992, the figure for the lakes was the same as the mountains, the similar thing also happened to the figures for the coast and the lakes in somewhere between 1997 and 2007. After a dramatic rise to its peak of 75,000 in 2002, the number of visitors to the lakes dropped quickly to 50,000 5 years later. In the meantime, the figure for the coast witnessed a fluctuation in the given years. By contrast, the figure for the mountains showed a fluctuation between 20,000 and 30,000 from 1987 to 2002 before undergoing a negligible rise at 35,000 in 2007.
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- The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors in thousands to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors in thousands to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 33.7804878049 204% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 965.302439024 176% => OK
No of words: 355.0 196.424390244 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78873239437 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44370053142 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402816901408 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.33902439024 323% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1601822292 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162561392553 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830167798344 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711865884665 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124571103126 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073651101698 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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