You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given line garph illustrates how many worldwide tourisms who visit to three different areas in a European nation over the period of 20 years, started from 1987.
What stands out from the line graph is that while the coast was the highest over 20 years, the mountains was reduce to lowest. Furthemore, all the areas had the upward trend and the lakes had the most fluctuate.
In 1987, the coast was largest with 40 thousands before witnessing a slightly decrease in 1992, at roughly 35 thousands. In contrast, the coast experienced a stability soar to around 75 thousands in 2007. In term of the mountains, the figure ranked second in 1987 with 20 thousands after increasing to 30 thousands in 1997. While the number of the mountains from 1997 to 2002 unchanged, between 2002 and 2007 the average was continued improve to roughly 35 thousands.
Besides, in 1987, with just 10 thousands, the lakes was the lowest before witnessing an substantialy bounce to 40 thousands in 1997. Similarly, the number of the lakes rocketed in the period of 5 years, started from 1997 to around 75 thousands. The contrast at the end of period, the lakes was had the downward trend which seen an remarkably plummet in 2007, at 50 thousands to ranked second.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
In the day and ages, while athletes can train in the building specialised facilities that provied by government to achieve international sports, citilizations do not had the sports facilities to use. Hence, that became to one of the most noticeable issues in some nations. For my perspectives, I halfly agree with the given topic and the reasons will be explained in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, when the government bulding many facilities for athletes, they may get more reputation about sport in the world. For the explain, athlete may improve better and stronger than that of them in the past when training in the specialised facilities instead of normally. That also lead to many merit for that nations when they may get more sponsor from many worldwide sport clubs for athletes in that countries. For example, nowadays, many european countries were focus on spend money and the budget on bulding many center of sports. Hence, they was achieve many medal and training many prospects athletes.
On the other hand, providing sports facilities which citilizations can use also take many merits. Everyone, both old and young can connect with sports so that governments also reduce the budget for medicine because the the healthy of people had improve very much when they playing sports. Besides, that may plummet children who had been passinate about mobilephone, internets. For example, in Vietnam, many sports facilities was building in public such as park, riverside or anywhere we can think in the mind. Hence, citizen who are living in Vietnam have the good healthy and the athletes also training in everywhere they want instead of the specializations facilities which very expensive.
In conclusion, weighing up both sides of argument are the same, spend budget on athletes many very important but on citizen also take many merits. So, I have the halfly agree with the idea that providing sports facilities for everyone or athletes may better.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...ighest over 20 years, the mountains was reduce to lowest. Furthemore, all the areas ha...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...est with 40 thousands before witnessing a slightly decrease in 1992, at roughly 35 thousands. In co...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ty soar to around 75 thousands in 2007. In term of the mountains, the figure ranke...
^^
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... lakes was the lowest before witnessing an substantialy bounce to 40 thousands in ...
^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s was had the downward trend which seen an remarkably plummet in 2007, at 50 thous...
^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('remarkably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('plummet') instead of another adjective.
...s was had the downward trend which seen an remarkably plummet in 2007, at 50 thousands to ranked seco...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 135, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eputation about sport in the world. For the explain, athlete may improve better and stronge...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 301, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun merit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many merits'.
Suggestion: many merits
... instead of normally. That also lead to many merit for that nations when they may get more...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 562, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
... many center of sports. Hence, they was achieve many medal and training many prospects ...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 570, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun medal seems to be countable; consider using: 'many medals'.
Suggestion: many medals
...nter of sports. Hence, they was achieve many medal and training many prospects athletes. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... reduce the budget for medicine because the the healthy of people had improve very much...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 216, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... reduce the budget for medicine because the the healthy of people had improve very much...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 246, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...e because the the healthy of people had improve very much when they playing sports. Bes...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 246, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...e because the the healthy of people had improve very much when they playing sports. Bes...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, second, similarly, so, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 21.0 3.15609756098 665% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 33.7804878049 272% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2995.0 965.302439024 310% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 590.0 196.424390244 300% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07627118644 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92848004997 3.73543355544 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67028774782 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 106.607317073 251% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454237288136 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.0 283.868780488 308% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 3.36585365854 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 8.94146341463 336% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4853569546 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76666666667 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109338929641 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363107777857 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618096548946 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066811761038 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855967836655 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 40.7170731707 258% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...ighest over 20 years, the mountains was reduce to lowest. Furthemore, all the areas ha...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...est with 40 thousands before witnessing a slightly decrease in 1992, at roughly 35 thousands. In co...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ty soar to around 75 thousands in 2007. In term of the mountains, the figure ranke...
^^
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... lakes was the lowest before witnessing an substantialy bounce to 40 thousands in ...
^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s was had the downward trend which seen an remarkably plummet in 2007, at 50 thous...
^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('remarkably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('plummet') instead of another adjective.
...s was had the downward trend which seen an remarkably plummet in 2007, at 50 thousands to ranked seco...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 135, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eputation about sport in the world. For the explain, athlete may improve better and stronge...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 301, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun merit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many merits'.
Suggestion: many merits
... instead of normally. That also lead to many merit for that nations when they may get more...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 562, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
... many center of sports. Hence, they was achieve many medal and training many prospects ...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 570, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun medal seems to be countable; consider using: 'many medals'.
Suggestion: many medals
...nter of sports. Hence, they was achieve many medal and training many prospects athletes. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... reduce the budget for medicine because the the healthy of people had improve very much...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 216, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... reduce the budget for medicine because the the healthy of people had improve very much...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 246, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...e because the the healthy of people had improve very much when they playing sports. Bes...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 246, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...e because the the healthy of people had improve very much when they playing sports. Bes...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, second, similarly, so, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 21.0 3.15609756098 665% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 33.7804878049 272% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2995.0 965.302439024 310% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 590.0 196.424390244 300% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07627118644 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92848004997 3.73543355544 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67028774782 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 106.607317073 251% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454237288136 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.0 283.868780488 308% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 3.36585365854 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 8.94146341463 336% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4853569546 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76666666667 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109338929641 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363107777857 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618096548946 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066811761038 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855967836655 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 40.7170731707 258% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.