the bar chart

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the bar chart

The bar chart gives information about the number of students in each primary and lower secondary class in South Korea, Japan, UK, Mexico, Denmark and Iceland in comparison to the average number of the world in 2006.
It is noticeable that the average numbers of students per class around the world were in the middle of the scale, higher than Denmark, Iceland but way lower than the two Asian countries in the chart.
South Korea and Japan are the two Asian countries, which had the highest figures for class size, at over 34 students and around 29 to 34 students per class in both school levels respectively. While the world only had just over 25 to below 30 pupils each class.
Turning to the remaining countries, with the average figure for the world class size, Denmark and Iceland stood way below at just around 20 to 23 students each classroom.
In addition, UK and Mexico had a different pattern than the others. In UK, the number of students per class in primary school was equal to the world but the remaining one was only half of the world average. And Mexico had more students than the world average in lower secondary.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ass in both school levels respectively. While the world only had just over 25 to belo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65671641791 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27680304009 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47263681592 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0390495774 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0751359217184 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357841655252 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684412356656 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572546648404 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791545206596 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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