Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In the modern day, people have different views about parents should spend spare time with their kids by reading books or watching TV, and movies or let one’s children play by themselves. Although there are numerous advantages in both views, I personally believe that parental involvement is necessary in some cases of kids' recreational activities and studies.
There are broad-based benefits when parents tell or read books to their children. First, thanks to spending more time with one's children, parents are able to have a thorough insight into their characteristic kids. As a result, suitable nurture methods are more likely to apply as either weaker families’ connections or gap generations can be diminished. Second, parents can convey their knowledge by reading books or watching movies with their children. In addition, parents may ensure that their youngsters develop not only a well-rounded literacy but also an ethical character without suffering misunderstanding concepts.
However, there are various advantages when children read books or watch TV, and movies by themselves. First, due to the development of technological items, it is undeniable that such TV channels as Disney or Kid TV provide a lot of educational information to youngsters. In addition, kids may have numerous opportunities to broaden their horizons about floras and faunas live in distinct continents. Second, since many youngsters nowadays are developing over-reliance lifestyles on their parents, they should be allowed to play alone or with their friends. This may help children to be independent of their parents because parental involvements in some cases may act as a deterrent to discourage children from developing natural characters.
In conclusion, while it is true that children play with their parents or alone, which are beneficial in some cases, I concur that parents should spend more time with their kids by reading books or watching TV, and movies rather than let them play alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...irst, thanks to spending more time with ones children, parents are able to have a th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42903225806 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95787454978 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8574884135 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.461538462 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31448516839 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137993543976 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108787756736 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230157434001 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033739209046 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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