Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Parents are the first teachers to their kids,it is commonly believed that,storytelling by parents is really important.But others argue that reading books and watching television can be done by the youngsters and parental intervention is not required.In this essay,I am going to discuss both the views and share my personal opinion.
Parents are the first persons who spend more time with children than anyone else.So,during the course of childhood,if parents are telling the stories taking some time out from their hectic life,children will be motivated towards the good manners and they will carry it when they grow.Furthermore,apart from morality,the connectivity between the parents and children will become efficient which creates a lot of positivity in the children.For example,students who spent their childhood with parents behave well in school and on the other hand,youngers who did not spend their time with their parents act oddly.
It is also argued that,nowadays,children are capable enough to manage their work,including,reading books,watching television of their choice like cartoons or movies.If the parental involvement is missing during the schooling then it may lead to several negative paths on the children.In other words,children give importance to television than parents.For an instance,a past survey,reveals that more than 60 percent of children prefer to spend their time in front of the televison by enjoying their favourite program than seeing their mother or father.
In a conclusion,parents killing time with the children is very important for their children personal growth rather than allowing them to do their activities on their own.It is also suggested that,the more time parents spend with children in teaching them stories,the more good manners their children learn.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-09-20 | doquytuan | 61 | view |
| 2020-10-11 | Ronald88 | 79 | view |
| 2020-10-08 | thaotrinh | 73 | view |
| 2020-05-15 | nghialeminh | 73 | view |
| 2018-11-27 | hungtran1196 | 77 | view |
- Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment 73
- Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries Do you agree or disagree 67
- The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries 61
- In some countries where the unemployment rate are high most students should be offered only primary education There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hope of finding jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...nts are the first teachers to their kids,it is commonly believed that,storytelling ...
^^^
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , storytelling
... their kids,it is commonly believed that,storytelling by parents is really important.But othe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ytelling by parents is really important.But others argue that reading books and wat...
^^^
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...d parental intervention is not required.In this essay,I am going to discuss both t...
^^
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...tervention is not required.In this essay,I am going to discuss both the views and ...
^^
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... to discuss both the views and share my personal opinion. Parents are the first persons who s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ore time with children than anyone else.So,during the course of childhood,if paren...
^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , during
...e time with children than anyone else.So,during the course of childhood,if parents are ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
... time with children than anyone else.So,during the course of childhood,if parents are telling the st...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...e else.So,during the course of childhood,if parents are telling the stories taking ...
^^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , children
...ing some time out from their hectic life,children will be motivated towards the good mann...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...s and they will carry it when they grow.Furthermore,apart from morality,the connectivity be...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , apart
...will carry it when they grow.Furthermore,apart from morality,the connectivity between ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...hey grow.Furthermore,apart from morality,the connectivity between the parents and ch...
^^^^
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...tes a lot of positivity in the children.For example,students who spent their childh...
^^^
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , students
...f positivity in the children.For example,students who spent their childhood with parents ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , youngers
...ave well in school and on the other hand,youngers who did not spend their time with their...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , nowadays
...nts act oddly. It is also argued that,nowadays,children are capable enough to manage t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , including
... are capable enough to manage their work,including,reading books,watching television of th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , watching
...anage their work,including,reading books,watching television of their choice like cartoon...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...of their choice like cartoons or movies.If the parental involvement is missing dur...
^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of their choice like cartoons or movies.If the parental involvement is missing dur...
^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... several negative paths on the children.In other words,children give importance to...
^^
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , children
...ive paths on the children.In other words,children give importance to television than pare...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...e importance to television than parents.For an instance,a past survey,reveals that ...
^^^
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
... television than parents.For an instance,a past survey,reveals that more than 60 p...
^^
Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reveals
...an parents.For an instance,a past survey,reveals that more than 60 percent of children p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , parents
...eir mother or father. In a conclusion,parents killing time with the children is very ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...hem to do their activities on their own.It is also suggested that,the more time pa...
^^
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...s on their own.It is also suggested that,the more time parents spend with children i...
^^^^
Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...d with children in teaching them stories,the more good manners their children learn....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69003690037 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54517114536 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.643083122 49.4020404114 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 385.5 106.682146367 361% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.75 20.7667163134 326% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.5 7.06120827912 432% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257053385826 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1731094208 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467129420913 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1731094208 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467129420913 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.2 13.0946893788 299% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.47 50.2224549098 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.91 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.