Some people think that technological advances have brought more harm than good. Do you agree or disagree?
In all times technological advancement has gradually improved our people’s lives in diverse spheres. However, currently, some humans believe that these benefits have delivered more bane than boon. I totally disagree with this statement and believe that technologies are making our life better.
Firstly, contemporary innovations approach humanity towards space. In other words, due to the previous statement, the human beings could go into outer space and colonize the moon. Therefore, this development process leads humanity beyond our solar system to explore new universes and black holes. For example, Neil Armstrong was the first human who has ever landed on the moon, and he said:”That's one small step for a man, one giant leap for mankind», he made it owing to technological progress in those times. Thus, nowadays, because of the rapid development of technology, humanity can fly to Mars, without technology, people would have lived in the ancient age.
Secondly, technological breakthroughs are accelerating the process of production food and other needs. This means that people can purchase any food in the store because it is mass produced. Likewise, each human is capable to order delivery to their house specifying several parameters for shipment and the address where that person lives. For instance, in an application called “Delivery Club” you choose which store you require the products from and products meals you need and specify the delivery address and in a few hours you will obtain what you requested. Hence, technology nowadays speeds up simple processes and improves people's lives.
To conclude, I strongly disagree with the statement regarding the predominance of negative aspects of technological progress and believe that high-tech benefits are enhancing the standard of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54480286738 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85600790103 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659498207885 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0838582494 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184069765381 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583203716566 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515696297051 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112660310492 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735237436396 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.