Online shopping is increasing dramatically How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of job required

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Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of job required?

Undoubtedly, Internet shopping has become increasing popular these days thanks to its convenience and speed. However, it is argued that this development has greatly influenced the nature and some particular types of jobs. This essay will focus on discussing the extent of these effects.

To begin with, online shopping has both negative and positive effects on the nature. Firstly, on the one hand, as for the adverse impact, it can lead to the overuse of plastic packaging. For instance, when delivering foods, the restaurants or the stalls have to use a great number of single-use products such as plastic bags, plastic boxes or plastic spoons. As a consequence, the non-biodegradable wastes from these throwaway tablewares would remain in thousands of years in nature. However, on the other hand, ordering products through internet can contribute to reducing the amount of exhaust fumes released from vehicles. Compared to the number of drives made by customers themselves, it is more economic that the shippers only take one single route to deliver the products. As a result, the toxic emissions are significantly cut down.

Another effect arising from this issue is the change of employment related to online shopping market. Due to the rapid growth of this trend, many retail jobs are cut down. Therefore, workers have to learn more skills in order to adapt to work online. As a consequence, people who do not have required skills to survive in this circumstance would likely to lose their jobs. However, this can also result in many jobs opportunities for shippers or delivery companies. People can also apply for many jobs such as content creators, photographers or digital marketing staffs in order to promote the products and convince the customers to purchase them.

In conclusion, the spread of online shopping has deeply affected on environment and employment in both positive and negative ways. However, I hold the view that the advantages would outweigh its disadvantages.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.246875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84813364054 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7287993771 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2777777778 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175049479028 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516856156721 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577810960739 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106702576557 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519995012051 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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