When you are at work or study, you may confront problems – requiring to think about creativity. For example, you are given a task to complete that is very different from other tasks you do. Would you prefer to work alone or work with others?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Encountering problems when completing a task is not an uncommon phenomenon in today's changing world. challenges and obstacles are not scary, as long as one can find an effective way to solve them. From the life experiences and the knowledge I have learned, I assert that working with others exerts more significant functions on creative thinking than working alone.
To begin with, working in a group allows us to have brainstorms which is conducive to inspiring creative thinking. Undeniably, everyone exists in the world is unique and special. our distinct life experiences, variable learning styles, and diversified perspectives enable us to exchange ideas and thoughts, which will stimulate us to come up with more excellent ideas and to help us think outside of the box. Thus when facing intricate problems, we can find some creative solutions by thinking comprehensively. Besides, during the process of working in a team, members will be motivated and stimulated, which means no one will slack off. everyone will be engaged in discussing a way to solve problems efficiently. However, if one tends to accomplish a task individually，it is easy to get bored and defeated. without communication or discussion, we are easily confined to one-sided thinking and fail to think comprehensively. Hence, it is working with others that will be more helpful in completing the task creatively.
In addition, without the stimulation and encouragement from outside, it is hardly possible to gain the confidence to crack the problems. Nevertheless, working with a bunch of people helps to build up an active atmosphere, benefiting to establishing confidence. No matter how tough the challenge is and how urgent the task will be, co-workers will confront us and encourage us to believe we are the one who has the ability to concur all the difficulties. In this situation, we have a realistic sense of capabilities and feeling secure in that challenge. we will find enormous strength and energy in our bodies to help come up with innovative ideas. With this attractive trait, I believe success has already approached.
In conclusion, from what I have discussed above, I would reiterate my point that working with a group of people enables people to come up with creative ideas quickly as group working is conducive to brainstorming and building confidence.
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| 2020-05-19 | Cheungrn | 80 | view |
| 2019-02-12 | Shirley Lu | 95 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24603174603 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15059373241 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7118840267 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.368421053 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18045341937 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585678803209 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599643500759 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127673651967 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429953980683 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.