A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is argued whether only a person should be responsible for their state of health, or the authorities must take care of their citizens. I agree that health should be everyone's priority, but I also believe that the government should provide everyone with their support. In the following essay, I will explain my position.
As it was previously said, people should take care of their own health and must not burden it on the government. It is easy for someone sick to blame the others for not helping; however, when one is feeling unwell, they do not expect a Minister to drive them to a hospital. Instead, they request medical help by making a call for an ambulance. Therefore, without their own actions, people should not expect to receive treatment. Besides that, everyone should have a healthy lifestyle, like consuming healthy nutrition, doing sports, having a balanced sleep, reducing bad habits. Those actions would guarantee a good health condition and prevent a number of health issues.
Meanwhile, people cannot take care of their health without having access to medical institutions and not overpriced drugs, so the state has to provide those. Since many medicines and medical services are quite expensive for some people, the state should come up with reforms to make the former affordable for everybody. For example, the Ministry of Health in Ukraine has a system of public hospitals where people can come and receive either free or low-cost medical treatment. This is extremely helpful for those who are out of money and require immediate support.
To conclude, in terms of keeping somebody healthy, both a person and the government should cooperate. While people h to organize their healthy routine and take actions in times of need, the authorities have to make sure of all medical services to be affordable and accessible for the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06840390879 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5983809519 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563517915309 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0022221589 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.733333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165231301231 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584103719442 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379919034513 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10505569569 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360867843582 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.