Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
An active way of life along with healthy diet have recently become one of the most important parts in humans’ life. Many adults have noticed that their kids are inclined to spend more and more time doing different sports. This essay will examine the pros and cons of the suggested issue and provide relevant arguments.
On the one and, this phenomenon showes many negative impacts for a player or their money. It means that it can cause major injures, and that could lead to medical expenses. Moreover, many activities require investment of big amount of money to play. For example, I decided to play lacrosse, but then I understood that I have to purchase an armor and a stick for 150$ totally, and that is too big for 2 months practice. Thus, most of sports may cause serious problems with behavior and some of them often require to spend money.
On the other hand, an opinion exists that activities are a great way to meet new people and socialize. It implies that the easiest way to make new friends is attending sport practicing. Moreover, many parents bring their children to a sport section, so that they could learn how to communicate with fellows. For example, when I used to play in a city team of soccer, I had a mate who was attending practices to spend good time with his friends while doing favorite action. Therefore, athletics is a wonderful opportunity to meet new acquaintances and talk to people who share one’s interests.
Finally, it is a great way for children to understand the basics of everyday life. It follows that kids could learn that to win one have to do their best and work hard, however loosing gives an opportunity to grow above oneself. In addition to that, Yale University discovered that at young age, kids do not understand what a competition it is and they are not trying to win, but have a good time. For example, my friend thought that he is better than anyone else at football, but after attending a practice, he noticed that to keep his superiority he should work hard. Hence, exercising is one of the possible solutions to one’s thought that they have achieved everything and there are no new horizons for them.
All in all, in the essay above I have demonstrated some advantages and disadvantages of active lifestyle. Although regular activities could be harmful and require investing, it is a possibility to meet new people and kids could understand simple moral through practices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$150'.
Suggestion: $150
...ve to purchase an armor and a stick for 150$ totally, and that is too big for 2 mont...
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Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practices spending'.
Suggestion: practices spending
... soccer, I had a mate who was attending practices to spend good time with his friends while doing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.768321513 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6149350696 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529550827423 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4121890652 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.85 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.15 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139561114489 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422523852626 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381462240877 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740654116381 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224196665521 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.