Nowdays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local and codes of behavior
These days, a vast amount of people are migrating to adopted countries than ever before. This phenomena has generally been conducted in earlier times. It is an indisputable fact that the revolutionize information supported many people being immigrant. Nevertheless, these remains disagreement whether immigrant could adapt to local dan codes behavior as well. Though, I personally believe that these remains some major society problems for supporting new behavior of newcomer. It is interesting to note that, most of people had some reasons conducting migrate in adopted country ranging from searching some occupations, education places, and altered a new housing environment. Further and even more importantly, immigrant would be faced of some major codes problem that essential to adapt in the new place. The immigrant frequently had policy problems, including entailed visas permit. It occasionally seen the prohibited ones used this case to migrate in other country without visas permit. Equally importantly, immigrants have social norm from the previous district that grow in earlier time and should be adapted as well at new place. In my position, some of people abandon their old ways to adapt local and codes of behavior. Its ensure the newcomer would adapt a new district including the behavior local people, language, and other matters. It is indisputable fact that a few immigrant has their life possess if they could not adjust the local behavior wisely. In my position, it does not matter to stay in the country where we placed. It has been given a vast mount of memories, though a great deal of occupation that we can build independently.
By way of conclution, I would reaffirm my position that these remain negative impact that could be faced by immigrant. In order to integrated the local society these remain a vast mount issues and problems.
- Nowdays more people are migrating to other countries than ever before In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local and codes of behavior 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
... to adopted countries than ever before. This phenomena has generally been conducted ...
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Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...ntries than ever before. This phenomena has generally been conducted in earlier tim...
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... times. It is an indisputable fact that the revolutionize information supported many people being...
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Line 1, column 510, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...wcomer. It is interesting to note that, most of people had some reasons conducting migrate in ...
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Line 1, column 752, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'codes'' or 'code's'?
Suggestion: codes'; code's
... immigrant would be faced of some major codes problem that essential to adapt in the ...
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Line 1, column 994, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in other country without visas permit. Equally importantly, immigrants have soc...
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Line 1, column 996, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...n other country without visas permit. Equally importantly, immigrants have social nor...
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Line 1, column 1158, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...d as well at new place. In my position, some of people abandon their old ways to adapt local a...
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Line 1, column 1382, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun immigrant seems to be countable; consider using: 'few immigrants'.
Suggestion: few immigrants
...matters. It is indisputable fact that a few immigrant has their life possess if they could no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23411371237 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81980065125 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5923074213 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0588235294 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.52941176471 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34243813562 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101458815276 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899279125652 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216714509 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122929394096 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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