You have rented an apartment lately but you are facing some problems. Write a letter to landlord
Describe the detail of problem
How these are affecting your family
Ask for possible solution
Dear Sir,
My name is Harsimran kaur and I am your tenant residing in one of your apartments in pacific society. I am writing this letter regarding the dissatisfaction related to the facilities in the apartment we took on rent.
As per the rent contract, it was assured to me that we will be provided 24 hours facility of water and electricity. Unfortunately, I am exceedingly displeased with the experience in your apartment. From the first day my family is struggling with water deficiency as it comes only for one hour in the morning and evening. Consequently, we lack in managing domestic chores with this quantity of water. Furthermore, from last weekend I am also facing the issue of electricity cut which is acting as a prominent barrier in doing daily activities such as ironing, washing clothes and even watching tv has become a big issue.
As a result of these problems my husband has to devote a lot of time in procuring water from nearby colony and has to face a lot of hassle. My children are bored and distressed as they cannot do their homework on time. Electricity problem has affected the usage of technical gadgets which are frequently used by my children and even husband for work purposes.
I would like to request that this issue needs an immediate solution otherwise problems can be worse. As its your duty to provide us these amenities I request you to take action positively otherwise I had no choice left, I will be terminating the rent contract and shift to another place.
Looking forward for a quick resolution for this issue
Yours faithfully,
Harsimran Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ion otherwise problems can be worse. As its your duty to provide us these amenities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, as to, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81090909091 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86241185941 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6759455253 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.769230769 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204075715316 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063724619931 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426077595036 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102526912473 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381025294752 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.