Some people think that having a set of retirement age(eg 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
A lot of persons opine that a fixed age for every individual to retire irrespective of their job title is an unfair act, rather they argue that only some workers should enjoy the right to retirement at an early age and get pensions from the government. This essay disagrees with this view and will suggest the kind of workers that should enjoy the benefits of early retirement .
People have different views about the issue of retirement. Some argue that only some workers should retire early for various reasons. However, a specific age for retirement is proper and a fair act because all jobs and employment in the society contribute equally to its development. Every work in the society has its importance, thus, it is pertinent the government show equal treatment for all workers also in terms of mandatory retirement age. This will invariably show that the government is commited to fairness and equality to every person in the society and not a biased treatment to favour certain workers. For instance, i believe that regardless of the occupation i work in, it helps the society grow and this is the same for other jobs. It will be sad and unjust to see other jobs enjoy the privilege of retiring early, receiving monthly pension and not my profession. This act hence, will promote inequality among workers in the society.
In my opinion, notwithstanding, the sort of workers that should enjoy early retirement benefits are the military officers who defend and protect the state against terror organisations. In other words, they put their lives on the frontline for the security of the nation. That said, all person should enjoy equal retirement age because all jobs are key and contributes equally to the betterment of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance, kind of, sort of, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95563139932 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68511941251 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508532423208 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6026007326 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300236963934 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108275697642 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691253604299 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21505475481 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680022503 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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