Some people think that development in technology causes environmental problems. Other people believe that technology can solve environmental problems.
Discuss both sides of the argument and then give your opinion
It is argued that development of technology affects positively on the environment, however some people believe in the opposite opinion. This essay discusses both of these opinions and expresses the author’s personal opinion about it.
It is obvious that some aids of technology can help to solve the environment’s problems. A goof illustration in this case is the robots that assist humans in this era, e.g. those that find trashes on the ground, hence the help to keep the environment clean. Another example is the electric automobiles which can significantly reduce the air pollution, because they do not produce any Carbon dioxide and other harmful substances.
On the other hand, it is claimed that technology developments has affected destroying in the environment. There are some reasons for this claim such as the nuclear rubbish which is a too harmful substance for the life. One more example of this negative effects is the plastic materials such as the plastic bottles that it takes hundreds of years or even more years for them to be recycled by the nature. Although these are correct, we can reduce their negative effects by some precautions, e.g. recycling the plastic rubbishes instead of throwing away them on the ground.
Overall, development of technology is a challenging issue when it comes to its effect in the environment. From my point of view, technology can be used for solving the environment problems, if the humans consider some rules and precautions, otherwise it may be harmful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ese opinions and expresses the author’s personal opinion about it. It is obvious that some aids...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., hence, however, if, may, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14170040486 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90333368559 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582995951417 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2451450504 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.454545455 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258742474365 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114157618282 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106128292564 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170724810218 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915685580784 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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