The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens' health rather than on protecting the environment. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the money which the government invest on doing medical research is necessary in order to protect citizens' health in place of protecting the environment. I agree up to a point, but both problems should be dealt with because of its significance.
On the one hand, obviously is money spent on medical research with a view to solve some medical problems such as curing diseases, importing medicines or even highly improving facilities, therefore reduces mortality rate. More specifically, investing money in research and facilities and then putting them into practice will greatly assist in coming up with some preventive measures, especially diseases that have never been treated before. Furthermore, important as health is to help people do whatever that they have a pasion for. Should it be lack of citizens' health, it will result in the lack of labour force and consequently deteriorate national economy. Throughout history, if it had not been for medical researches, humankind must have faced and still struggled with numerous of diseases that could possibly baffle the well-being of human.
On the other hand, spending money on protecting the environment has significant impacts on human health in the long run. Healthy population requires a healthy living environment. Not only is the money invested to protect the environment but it is also a essential foundation so as to remain human life. We cannot be healthy when our habitat is seriously polluted. It is evident that a vast number of fatal diseases are associated with the deterioration of the environment such as asthma and cancer. They are the result of the constant overexposure to air pollution and contaminated food-chain. Preventing it from being deteriorated and altered is the earliest preventive measure to ensure a healthy society hence protecting the environment.
In conclusion, the government should take both of these action into consideration. Proposing practical measures to better the quality of medical research and ensure the well-being of the nature is sensible move for all publications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34242424242 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02794605307 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0391664259 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311396934953 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918305342493 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1018413761 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19458909155 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102827250435 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.