Some people think that children should learn how to compete, but others think that children should be taught to cooperate to become more useful adults.
Express some reasons for both views and give your own opinions.
In this modern era, most parents are more worried for their child's education comparatively higher than two decades ago. There are two views in the society. First, several people believe that parents have to prepare their children competitive way whereas, other people think that team work is more important and more useful at adult age. This essay will discuss both the views but according to me, collaboration is most powerful tool to be a successful in life.
Competitive nature is required to get success in life that is believed by several people and they assert that in this competitive environment person have to be prepare for competitive exam from childhood as most of the job are now competitive in nature. For example, for one vacancy, many people are appearing for the interview, and everyone need to be compete with each other to get selected. They also believe that most of the government vacancies are fulfilled by competitive exam only and to crack the exam one have to be learn that ability.
On the other hand, some people assert that cooperation is most important ability to be taught to children to be happy in life. They say that cooperative nature is helpful for the person not only to lead the team but it also helps lot in personal life. Furthermore, by acquiring the collaboration with other team member or family member people can solve many problems which seems difficult at first instance. Recent study by Colombo university reveled that 90% people who poses good team work ability are happier in their professional and personal life.
To recapitulate, competitive nature required at some instance which need to be taught to children but, people can get more benefits if he/she have quality of cooperation.
- Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child s development However others say that things like television or friends have the most important influence on them Discuss both view and give your opinion 56
- You play a team sport with some friends Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn t able to play with you at the weekend You decide to write to him in hospital telling him about the match Write a letter to your friend In your letter tell him 73
- You want to study a course in a local collage You already wrote a letter about the same to the principal of the collage but you have not yet received any reply to your letter write letter to the principal In your letter Details of the course Why you want 78
- Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child s development However others say that things like television or friends have the most important influence on them Discuss both view and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that children should learn how to compete but others think that children should be taught to cooperate to become more useful adults Express some reasons for both views and give your own opinions 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worried about'?
Suggestion: worried about
... this modern era, most parents are more worried for their childs education comparatively hi...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...r example, for one vacancy, many people are appearing for the interview, and everyone need to...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... people can get more benefits if he/she have quality of cooperation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, whereas, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98969072165 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66724229448 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0557402052 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24064966559 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936952353523 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780037551341 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15125857281 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345986804322 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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