Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help other. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the developed world, the gap among classes in society is increasing. Because of this, the way how to help others has always been a much-debated topic. It is argued that wealthy people play the best crucial role in supporting other people. While it may work to a certain extent, I would believe that these exist superior aspects of a wealthy life.
It is understandable why some of the rich would lend aid to the needy. The key rationale in favor of this view is that wealthy individuals make a lucrative income, which allows them to allocate a part of their money to assist others. For instance, many Vietnamese high-class actors raise a charity fund. These contributions may curb the difficulties and challenges of the poor, so their lives would be better. Therefore, the ability to support everybody is a good thing in richness.
However, despite living under a huge amount of money and properties, wealthy people could gain more merits than giving other people an aid opportunity. Because they have abundant resources, it helps them enjoy their life and pursue their hobbies and interests like accessing the latest health care or traveling around the world and so on. Another value that the wealthy could receive lots of chances to invest in new fields they have never tried, which might lead them to reach a higher status in the community and achieve more profits. Hence, the life quality of rich people would be improved.
To sum up, it is important that there are people who are willing to help others, but for all argument mentioned above, I suppose that everyone can freely choose how to spend their belongings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, i suppose, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85611510791 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54011855372 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63309352518 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5975641272 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105504573748 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372207668936 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316588859253 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618323893501 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103123907471 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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