Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what way has technology affected the types of relationships people make?Has this become a positive or negative development ?
Modern technology has brought gigantic revolution in the way people interact with each other all accross the world. Presently, the contribution of mobile phones, e-mails, social sites to connect people of different civilizations deserves appreciation. Here, this essay will account for how it reflects social bondings, whether its positive or negative development.
There are numerous points to throw light on types of relationships people develop. First and foremost, people of different races and cultures are getting closer through social sites to be familiar with each other's lifestyle, occupa...
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