The reading and lecturev about the effect of the use of turtle excluder device into nets which are used by commercial shrimping fishing boats. The author sates theis no advantages from the use of (TED}. The lecturer cases doubts the passage and argue that the incorporation of TED in the nets have a lot of advantages
First, the author says that the turtles traped rarely.it is about one each month. Moreover,the cost of the shrimp which may be scape from the {TED} higher than the cost of the turtle , The lecturer arguing that .She claim that therev are thousand of the shrimop_fishing boats in the sea every day, so there are thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another type of species may caugh in these netsand this way extinted to these species.
second, the arthor suggested to decrease the time that the srimp boats allowed to keep thier nets underwater. The lecturer rebuts what the writer said. She mention it is difficul to inforce the company of fishing boats o decrease the time, and it is easer to inforce them to put {TED} TOo decrease accidentally caughing of turtles.
finaly, The writer stats the (TED) size not effective with the larger species sea turtle ,they can not scape through passage which provide in standerd (TED).The lecturer in the other hand, claim that the companys of fishing boats can easly fixed the size of the (TED) according to the sites that may be the large turtles found.
The reading and lecturev about the effect of the use of turtle excluder device into nets which are used by commercial shrimping fishing boats. The author sates theis no advantages from the use of (TED}. The lecturer cases doubts the passage and argue that the incorporation of TED in the nets have a lot of advantages
First, the author says that the turtles traped rarely.it is about one each month. Moreover,the cost of the shrimp which may be scape from the {TED} higher than the cost of the turtle , The lecturer arguing that .She claim that therev are thousand of the shrimop_fishing boats in the sea every day, so there are thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another type of species may caugh in these netsand this way extinted to these species.
second, the arthor suggested to decrease the time that the srimp boats allowed to keep thier nets underwater. The lecturer rebuts what the writer said. She mention it is difficul to inforce the company of fishing boats o decrease the time, and it is easer to inforce them to put {TED} TOo decrease accidentally caughing of turtles.
finaly, The writer stats the (TED) size not effective with the larger species sea turtle ,they can not scape through passage which provide in standerd (TED).The lecturer in the other hand, claim that the companys of fishing boats can easly fixed the size of the (TED) according to the sites that may be the large turtles found.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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The reading and lecturev about the effec...
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Message: Unpaired symbol: '{' seems to be missing
... theis no advantages from the use of TED}. The lecturer cases doubts the passage ...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eis no advantages from the use of TED}. The lecturer cases doubts the passage and a...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...D in the nets have a lot of advantages First, the author says that the turtles ...
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Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ely.it is about one each month. Moreover,the cost of the shrimp which may be scape f...
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Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...{TED} higher than the cost of the turtle , The lecturer arguing that .She claim th...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f the turtle , The lecturer arguing that .She claim that therev are thousand of th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
...the turtle , The lecturer arguing that .She claim that therev are thousand of the s...
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Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'claims'.
Suggestion: claims
...turtle , The lecturer arguing that .She claim that therev are thousand of the shrimop...
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Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...arguing that .She claim that therev are thousand of the shrimop_fishing boats in the sea...
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Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...oats in the sea every day, so there are thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another ...
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Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y, so there are thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another type of species ma...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...so there are thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another type of species may caugh in t...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...so there are thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another type of species may caugh in t...
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Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another type of species may caugh in the...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd this way extinted to these species. second, the arthor suggested to decrease...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...nted to these species. second, the arthor suggested to decrease the t...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...e the time that the srimp boats allowed to keep thier nets underwater. The lecturer reb...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...cturer rebuts what the writer said. She mention it is difficul to inforce the company o...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ease accidentally caughing of turtles. finaly, The writer stats the TED size no...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finaly
...y caughing of turtles. finaly, The writer stats the TED size not effe...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ctive with the larger species sea turtle ,they can not scape through passage which...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...h passage which provide in standerd TED.The lecturer in the other hand, claim that ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 245.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76326530612 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38571148073 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6596955403 49.2860985944 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 21.698381199 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506827385757 0.272083759551 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204003598939 0.0996497079465 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205525523846 0.0662205650399 310% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314009246515 0.162205337803 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.319395466036 0.0443174109184 721% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading and lecturev about the effec...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '{' seems to be missing
... theis no advantages from the use of TED}. The lecturer cases doubts the passage ...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eis no advantages from the use of TED}. The lecturer cases doubts the passage and a...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...D in the nets have a lot of advantages First, the author says that the turtles ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ely.it is about one each month. Moreover,the cost of the shrimp which may be scape f...
^^^^
Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...{TED} higher than the cost of the turtle , The lecturer arguing that .She claim th...
^^
Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f the turtle , The lecturer arguing that .She claim that therev are thousand of th...
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Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
...the turtle , The lecturer arguing that .She claim that therev are thousand of the s...
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Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'claims'.
Suggestion: claims
...turtle , The lecturer arguing that .She claim that therev are thousand of the shrimop...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...arguing that .She claim that therev are thousand of the shrimop_fishing boats in the sea...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...oats in the sea every day, so there are thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y, so there are thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another type of species ma...
^^
Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...so there are thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another type of species may caugh in t...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...so there are thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another type of species may caugh in t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e thousand of turtles lost . furthermore another type of species may caugh in the...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd this way extinted to these species. second, the arthor suggested to decrease...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...nted to these species. second, the arthor suggested to decrease the t...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...e the time that the srimp boats allowed to keep thier nets underwater. The lecturer reb...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...cturer rebuts what the writer said. She mention it is difficul to inforce the company o...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ease accidentally caughing of turtles. finaly, The writer stats the TED size no...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finaly
...y caughing of turtles. finaly, The writer stats the TED size not effe...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ctive with the larger species sea turtle ,they can not scape through passage which...
^^
Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...h passage which provide in standerd TED.The lecturer in the other hand, claim that ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 245.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76326530612 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38571148073 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6596955403 49.2860985944 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 21.698381199 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506827385757 0.272083759551 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204003598939 0.0996497079465 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205525523846 0.0662205650399 310% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314009246515 0.162205337803 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.319395466036 0.0443174109184 721% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.