Friendships is an important thing in our life. Any person try to maintain a strong relationship with their friend. Some believe keeping a friendships with a small numer of people is mor important for to get happience. Other believe the opposit is better. Admettidly knowing making maney new fried is crucial thing, because by doing so we will get a lot of skills and experience. I believe maintain friendships with a small number of people is a paramount part in our happiness. I will explore my reasons to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, and fundamental reason is small group of friend mean my old closely friends who can feel comfortable with them. any indivitual has friends who share same hooby and interested sport to do together. they understand each other. for example, I had a friend from high school. we are both like sewing. We used to enroll in netting program and some time win. so have same attitude. When I was gratuated and began my job. We sitt hang out to enjoy our weekend withour kids. we can see how closely friend is a big part of our happiness.
Furthermore. my closely friends ones who trust them more than any one in the life. I can talk with them about any concern in my life. Moreovereto, it is very difficult to build trust with new people. I strongly trust my friend that I have mentiond above. She alwayes support me in any difficult situation I faced in my whole life is a compelling example from my experience, Before five years ago, I decided to buy house but, I do not have enough money to pay for down payment. My frienf help me in this issue and borroed me the mony that I need. No one can do that only my best friend .
In conclusion, ability to maintain happiness is easier with specific nuber of very close friends.
Friendships is an important thing in our life. Any person try to maintain a strong relationship with their friend. Some believe keeping a friendships with a small numer of people is mor important for to get happience. Other believe the opposit is better. Admettidly knowing making maney new fried is crucial thing, because by doing so we will get a lot of skills and experience. I believe maintain friendships with a small number of people is a paramount part in our happiness. I will explore my reasons to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, and fundamental reason is small group of friend mean my old closely friends who can feel comfortable with them. any indivitual has friends who share same hooby and interested sport to do together. they understand each other. for example, I had a friend from high school. we are both like sewing. We used to enroll in netting program and some time win. so have same attitude. When I was gratuated and began my job. We sitt hang out to enjoy our weekend withour kids. we can see how closely friend is a big part of our happiness.
Furthermore. my closely friends ones who trust them more than any one in the life. I can talk with them about any concern in my life. Moreovereto, it is very difficult to build trust with new people. I strongly trust my friend that I have mentiond above. She alwayes support me in any difficult situation I faced in my whole life is a compelling example from my experience, Before five years ago, I decided to buy house but, I do not have enough money to pay for down payment. My frienf help me in this issue and borroed me the mony that I need. No one can do that only my best friend .
In conclusion, ability to maintain happiness is easier with specific nuber of very close friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friendship' or simply 'friendships'?
Suggestion: a friendship; friendships
...with their friend. Some believe keeping a friendships with a small numer of people is mor imp...
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Line 1, column 416, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ce. I believe maintain friendships with a small number of people is a paramount part in our happi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lain my point of view in this subject. First, and fundamental reason is small g...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Any
...nds who can feel comfortable with them. any indivitual has friends who share same h...
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Suggestion: They
...by and interested sport to do together. they understand each other. for example, I h...
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Suggestion: For
...o together. they understand each other. for example, I had a friend from high schoo...
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Suggestion: We
...ample, I had a friend from high school. we are both like sewing. We used to enroll...
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Suggestion: So
...l in netting program and some time win. so have same attitude. When I was gratuate...
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Suggestion: We
... out to enjoy our weekend withour kids. we can see how closely friend is a big par...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...friend is a big part of our happiness. Furthermore. my closely friends ones who...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...end is a big part of our happiness. Furthermore. my closely friends ones who trust them...
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Suggestion: My
...part of our happiness. Furthermore. my closely friends ones who trust them mor...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...y friends ones who trust them more than any one in the life. I can talk with them about...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y concern in my life. Moreovereto, it is very difficult to build trust with new p...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
.... No one can do that only my best friend . In conclusion, ability to maintain ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50931677019 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56710305905 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580745341615 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2490193823 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.08 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.88 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386811006733 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113566392501 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149327265707 0.0737576698707 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237774975901 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.243948110349 0.0645574589148 378% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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