Telling the truth is a very beautiful thing .Any type of relationship should be built on honesty. For example, between parents and children,I in this order relationship will continue and become stronger,
First of all, if we do not telling the truth in any situation or a problem. This will worse this problem that any one can going through them for Example the father and mother are the best person that the kids follow them and try to copy their behaviors. So that the parent should be learn their children to say the truth every time and in any situation or problem. I remember when I am in seven grade I got C in histroy class ,I kept my score and did not tell my parent So no one can help me and my score become worse and wores . After the qauerter is done ,my parent got my score and knew they took my Ibad about one month till I improve my score again.
Second, lying is a bad habit.When some one hided facts this will complicate every thing and week the connection that suppose to be between the people. It is horrible thing even though the propuse of lying is to correct some thing or protect our friend from bad situation. Furthermore persnon how lie at frist time then he used to lie evey time with any one. I read story about a boy who used to swim with his friend. One day their friend hered him says : help, help I am drowing , they hurried up to save him, when they arrived,he becomes laughing and says it just joking. after this accident no one from his fried trust him.
Finaly,I believe that telling the truth is a important thing ,because lying is horrible behaive,furthermore, It's worse the situation when someone going through any problem. That is why the truth is the most important thing in any relationship 0r any situation.
Telling the truth is a very beautiful thing .Any type of relationship should be built on honesty. For example, between parents and children,I in this order relationship will continue and become stronger,
First of all, if we do not telling the truth in any situation or a problem. This will worse this problem that any one can going through them for Example the father and mother are the best person that the kids follow them and try to copy their behaviors. So that the parent should be learn their children to say the truth every time and in any situation or problem. I remember when I am in seven grade I got C in histroy class ,I kept my score and did not tell my parent So no one can help me and my score become worse and wores . After the qauerter is done ,my parent got my score and knew they took my Ibad about one month till I improve my score again.
Second, lying is a bad habit.When some one hided facts this will complicate every thing and week the connection that suppose to be between the people. It is horrible thing even though the propuse of lying is to correct some thing or protect our friend from bad situation. Furthermore persnon how lie at frist time then he used to lie evey time with any one. I read story about a boy who used to swim with his friend. One day their friend hered him says : help, help I am drowing , they hurried up to save him, when they arrived,he becomes laughing and says it just joking. after this accident no one from his fried trust him.
Finaly,I believe that telling the truth is a important thing ,because lying is horrible behaive,furthermore, It's worse the situation when someone going through any problem. That is why the truth is the most important thing in any relationship 0r any situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46105919003 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43115072078 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1627902291 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.5376344086 560% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402521010092 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158912196108 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194216801006 0.0737576698707 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3258278999 0.150856017488 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.251981429514 0.0645574589148 390% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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