Deciding which type of job is suitable is aconcern for any person,it is a very impotant for secure of our futur. In the past the selection of career is more dificult than recent years. I believe that for many reasos which I will mention in this essy.
To begin with, due to the improvement in the technologies like evolution of computers make poeples easly to search and indentify many types of career and figure out which one is best. I have example from my real life. My yong sister finished her collage last year and she dose not knew which type of careed is better for her, so she began to search on the internet in so many fields and talks with a lot of cuncelar to dissucus the situation and after that she could decide which career in more suitable for her. In the past, there is no internet to help poeple in this field
furthermore when the life become more complex this lead to increase the types of works avialable.like a computer field In contrast to easy lifestyle. in the past a lot of poeple work in agriculture and there are a very simple kinds of jobs, moreover, due to there easy life they do not need to variety types of jobs. for instance my father had a small farm used to in it, he plants fruit and many types of vegetable ,my mom hellps him, and after they grow we can eat them ,in addtion to sell extra that we do not need them, in this way we get our food and also earn some money from selling the extra.But right now with increasing of life complexity, this work can not cover our demand, therfore my and my brother need to do anotyer job tobe able to secure our futur.
In conclusion, due to increase in the tenchology fields and a wide range of jobs and variety of fields i believed it is easier to identify jobs in these days ,in contrast to the past.
Deciding which type of job is suitable is aconcern for any person,it is a very impotant for secure of our futur. In the past the selection of career is more dificult than recent years. I believe that for many reasos which I will mention in this essy.
To begin with, due to the improvement in the technologies like evolution of computers make poeples easly to search and indentify many types of career and figure out which one is best. I have example from my real life. My yong sister finished her collage last year and she dose not knew which type of careed is better for her, so she began to search on the internet in so many fields and talks with a lot of cuncelar to dissucus the situation and after that she could decide which career in more suitable for her. In the past, there is no internet to help poeple in this field
furthermore when the life become more complex this lead to increase the types of works avialable.like a computer field In contrast to easy lifestyle. in the past a lot of poeple work in agriculture and there are a very simple kinds of jobs, moreover, due to there easy life they do not need to variety types of jobs. for instance my father had a small farm used to in it, he plants fruit and many types of vegetable ,my mom hellps him, and after they grow we can eat them ,in addtion to sell extra that we do not need them, in this way we get our food and also earn some money from selling the extra.But right now with increasing of life complexity, this work can not cover our demand, therfore my and my brother need to do anotyer job tobe able to secure our futur.
In conclusion, due to increase in the tenchology fields and a wide range of jobs and variety of fields i believed it is easier to identify jobs in these days ,in contrast to the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2899408284 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28261292545 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529585798817 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.295211401 48.9658058833 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.0 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 5.45110844103 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440686587074 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195553346088 0.076458572812 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184713908217 0.0737576698707 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323202353418 0.150856017488 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.317347349683 0.0645574589148 492% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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