Education and health care should be funded by the government
It is thought that education and healthcare are counted as one of the basic needs of human being so that people will not be benighted, while healthcare is where individual go through for comfort when illnesses comes in . I will state my reasons with relevant examples.
Firstly, education is the stepping stone to success where infantile mind are molded to be a provident individual that plays a vital role for the development of society, For instance if the government will provide financial assistance both to the grade school and university level, student will encourage to finish the education, as a result they can gain more knowledge and understanding in addition to have a bright future. In the case of healthcare, I would rather say that there are option of medical insurance especially for the retiree citizens where the whole family is covered by the benefits, such as dental treatment which I believed the most expensive of them all, so that everyone can live a healthy life and well educated.
Secondly, in the case of better privilege people they can opt to pay for education and there are advantages as well, take for example they can go to an exclusive university where teachers can focus the one on one teaching to the student. Futhermore, in terms of healthcare they can visit a private clinics where the medical practitioners can render them the best treatment with satisfaction.
To sum up, it is all depend to the nation’s economy if the government can able to provide the assistance to the community as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91187739464 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81618355373 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.093041333 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.142857143 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2857142857 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091610304025 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425902968659 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449343948229 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623750310935 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291411642123 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.