You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In the coming decade, my country is poised to confront multifaceted challenges spanning environmental, population, and educational domains. These issues, if left unaddressed, could impede national progress. This essay will delve into the problems anticipated and propose viable solutions to mitigate their impact.
Foremost among the challenges is environmental degradation, with escalating pollution levels and resource depletion. The unchecked proliferation of vehicles contributes significantly to air pollution. Concurrently, rapid urbanization strains natural resources, exacerbating ecological imbalance. To overcome these challenges, robust policies on vehicular emissions and urban planning are imperative. Introducing stringent emission standards and incentivizing eco-friendly transportation can curtail pollution. Additionally, sustainable urban development practices, such as green spaces and renewable energy integration, can mitigate resource depletion.
Population growth is another imminent concern. Despite ongoing efforts to promote family planning, the population continues to burgeon. To address this, governments should intensify awareness campaigns and augment healthcare infrastructure, ensuring accessible family planning services. Furthermore, implementing policies that reward smaller families and penalize excessive procreation could offer an effective deterrent.
In the realm of education, systemic flaws impede the development of a skilled workforce. To counteract this, increased investment in education, coupled with comprehensive curriculum reforms, is essential. Allocating funds for modernizing educational infrastructure, enhancing teacher training, and aligning curricula with industry needs can foster a more adept workforce.
In conclusion, the next decade poses substantial challenges for my country, encompassing environmental degradation, population growth, and educational deficiencies. Strategic policies, sustained public awareness campaigns, and targeted investments in key sectors are pivotal to overcoming these challenges and fostering sustainable national development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.19615384615 5.12529762239 140% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37883028323 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.723076923077 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.60771543086 137% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1543757917 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.944444444 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125749973814 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320181292825 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312913807666 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632791782356 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03283228293 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 6.5 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.89 12.4159519038 192% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.77 8.58950901804 149% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.