The given data illustrates the expenditure on different items in Britain France Italy and Germany It is clear that Britain s spending on six consumer goods is significantly higher than that of the other three countries Also photographic films ranked first

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The given data illustrates the expenditure on different items in Britain, France, Italy, and Germany.
It is clear that Britain's spending on six consumer goods is significantly higher than that of the other three countries. Also, photographic films ranked first in terms of budget received in four states. Regarding Britain, photographic films and toys are the most prevalent products with the spent amount of over 170 and 165 thousand pounds sterling respectively, exceeding all other products which are ranging from 150 to 162. The same pattern can be witnessed in France with over 165 thousand pounds sterling spent on the film, although the expenditure on perfumes, tennis racquets and personal stereos remained below 150.000 pounds.
The contradictory trend is experienced in German and Italy, as their expenditure on most of the goods is relatively low in comparison with that of France and Britain. Only the statistic of Italian customers’ spending on toys can catch up with the former’s, both are 157.000 pounds, while all the German indexes are unable to reach the point of 150.000 pounds sterling.

The given data illustrates the expenditure on different items in Britain, France, Italy, and Germany.
It is clear that Britain's spending on six consumer goods is significantly higher than that of the other three countries. Also, photographic films ranked first in terms of budget received in four states. Regarding Britain, photographic films and toys are the most prevalent products with the spent amount of over 170 and 165 thousand pounds sterling respectively, exceeding all other products which are ranging from 150 to 162. The same pattern can be witnessed in France with over 165 thousand pounds sterling spent on the film, although the expenditure on perfumes, tennis racquets and personal stereos remained below 150.000 pounds.
The contradictory trend is experienced in German and Italy, as their expenditure on most of the goods is relatively low in comparison with that of France and Britain. Only the statistic of Italian customers’ spending on toys can catch up with the former’s, both are 157.000 pounds, while all the German indexes are unable to reach the point of 150.000 pounds sterling.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31638418079 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80936996661 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8065394837 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.428571429 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364098720408 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188260645891 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15801874533 0.0843802449381 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242253576705 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107064884358 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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