Some people like to do only what they already do well.Other people preferto try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Trying new things or do what you already know well
It is the nature of humans to try new things,if it is not there, then there will be no inventions, discoveries and there will be no technology. It is easy to do things what you know but I personally believe that trying new things will lead you to new heights.
Some of the people believe in mastering one area means when you practice the same thing for years then you will definately reach to the high standard of that area knowing all the errors and solutions.
But I am of the conviction that if you go on trying new things, it gives you thrill and excitement tagged with difficulties, but that difficulty make you strong and sharp and when you achieve success after great difficulty then this success gives you real happiness and a sense of achievement. Besides this will give you recognition of doing and achieving something different and mark yourself different from others. Don't this emotion thrill you. this makes your life adventurous , busy and happy.
However, working what you already know is like working monotonously and no enjoyment and having less chances of achieveing greater heights of success.
In conclusion, I believe that taking risk gives you difficulties but help you to achieve tremendous success and happiness so it's worth a try.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, then, well, in conclusion, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 225.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83111111111 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65457594272 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568888888889 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7686537355 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.777777778 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254422986857 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10995559242 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726552909343 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163510107154 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118433146101 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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