Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is crystal clear that honesty is one of the most important factors in strengthening the relationship between people. But it is vital that we always tell the truth in our relationships? Although some people think that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship, I firmly contented that sometimes telling the lie is of better consequences in the relationship. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most important reasons.
To begin with, telling small lies can sometimes motivate the people who their progress is important to us. Indeed, in some significant situation such as an important competition or exam, lying about people’s ability improves their confidence and decrease their anxiety. They are encouraged to make an effort with more incentive as well. Therefore, they perform well at the end. To exemplify, my brother decided to enroll in an art school entrance exam last year. I believed that he was not ready for the exam and needed more practice, but I wanted him to feel confident about his ability. I lied to him that he just needed to control his stress during the exam to succeed. However He was not accepted, one of the teachers admired him for his confidence and decided to give him another chance. Had I told him what I really thought, he might have given up and might have not tried enough.
Another reason which deserves some words is that some unpleasant truths hurt people’s feelings and it may lead to breaking up a long-term relationship. In other words, in some circumstances, some small lies not only do not have bad results but also satisfy people about themselves. Also, we respect other people’s tastes and attitudes with some kinds of lies. For instance, I had been invited to my friend’s birthday party. She had worn a cloth which did not suit her and I thought that she could choose a better one. When she asked me about her cloth, I said “you look great in this cloth.” If I had said my real opinion about her cloth, she would have been upset and might have not enjoyed her birthday.
To top off the discussion, according to the reasons mentioned above, although being honest is one of the most important factors in any relationship, but sometimes not telling the truth is the best way to respect people’s attitudes and feelings. Moreover, with small lies, we can maintain our long-term relationships and give people a feeling of confidence about both themselves and their abilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... his stress during the exam to succeed. However He was not accepted, one of the teacher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89573459716 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77326112936 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523696682464 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.790700362 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.380952381 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225694751668 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704551238889 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831001198276 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169444033762 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121414009914 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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