Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
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Reduction of environmental pollution has been a matter of discussion for past several decades. Some people argue that there is literally no efforts can be made by individual to keep our environment clean and thus state and other environmental corporation is the only options. I completely disagree with this view as apart from the activities of these organizations, I believe a person can contribute to the improvement of his/her surroundings by proper garbage disposal and recycling.
There are numerous environmental firms and governmental institutions that actively advocates for the preservation and improvement of our habitat. The reason for this watch is to provide for us and even our future generation a livable environment. For example, any commercial industry need to fulfill certain criteria and has to follow several rules and regulations to keep the surrounding atmosphere neat and clean. Thus people who live near that neighborhood can live in healthy environment. This is not just one thing these organizations are doing, there are many more to mention. Ultimately, their continuous monitoring helps us to get a improved habitat.
Despite the essential work done by the state and environmental friendly organization, every individual can do their part to improve their surroundings further. As an inhabitant and responsible citizen we all have our share of this great task. To illustrate, if we all properly dispose our garbage and recycle plastic and paper, it can reduce a huge burden from these organizations. As a result, our living area will be free from reusable junk and even city can earn enough revenue to run different services for its inhabitants.
In conclusion, environmental improvement is a shared responsibility of both a person and government or other companies. No state or corporation can do much to protect our environment in long run if we are not aware of our behavior. By implementing some simple activities such as recycling and garbage disposal we can share little bit of our responsibility along with state.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r continuous monitoring helps us to get a improved habitat. Despite the essent...
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Line 7, column 324, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...cling and garbage disposal we can share little bit of our responsibility along with state....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31288343558 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26496243096 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570552147239 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6908823239 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178807394237 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586638335385 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359442627126 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117092428365 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200991073874 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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