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Grammar and spelling errors:
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i absolutely agree with that statement,be...
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i absolutely agree with that statement,because i think technology has made children le...
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...utely agree with that statement,because i think technology has made children less...
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...ess creative than they were in the past.i hold this opinion becuase of several op...
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Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun opinion seems to be countable; consider using: 'several opinions'.
Suggestion: several opinions
...the past.i hold this opinion becuase of several opinion.the first,by developing technology,many...
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...ion becuase of several opinion.the first,by developing technology,many things ariun...
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...inion.the first,by developing technology,many things ariund us is available and it do...
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... and difficulty to gain those equipments,so it may cause children and even adults t...
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Suggestion: , it
... to be lazy and less creative.the second,it seems to me that spending so much time ...
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...e another reason for being less creative,specifically among children.the third,our educationa...
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...ve,specifically among children.the third,our educational system also may have great ...
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...mpacts on laziness and less creativeness,because teachers in schools do not teach childr...
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...t teach children that how to be creative,and how we can obviate our need ourselves. ...
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...how we can obviate our need ourselves. i pesronally think that developing techno...
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...ess creativeness directly.in other words,when a child see that everything around him ...
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...ything around him is ready and available,it is meaningless for him to invent someth...
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Suggestion: , instead
...ent something new and try to be creative,instead,it makes him indolent and lazy.besides,...
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...d,it makes him indolent and lazy.besides,he is not adapted to difficult situations,...
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...e is not adapted to difficult situations,while people in the past,because they faced t...
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...cult situations,while people in the past,because they faced to hard conditions,they used...
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...st,because they faced to hard conditions,they used to obviate their needs themselves,...
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...y used to obviate their needs themselves,therefore,they struggled more due to invent new t...
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... to find something that may help them. on the other hand,spending so much time on...
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...g that may help them. on the other hand,spending so much time on using technologies such...
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... using technologies such as playing game,watching tv,using internet excessively may be th...
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...ologies such as playing game,watching tv,using internet excessively may be the another...
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...nother reason for becoming less creative,specially among children.for instance,my cousin,w...
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...ve,specially among children.for instance,my cousin,who is 13 years old and lives in...
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...ly among children.for instance,my cousin,who is 13 years old and lives in tehran cit...
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...is 13 years old and lives in tehran city,usually spend his time on playng games on inter...
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...has no time to do his schools assignment,let alone being creative and doing somethin...
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...ng creative and doing something novel.so,because such a this person are increasing day b...
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...d doing something novel.so,because such a this person are increasing day by day,i beli...
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... a this person are increasing day by day,i believe than it can affects other child...
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...a this person are increasing day by day,i believe than it can affects other child...
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...easing day by day,i believe than it can affects other children directly. also,educatio...
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...t can affects other children directly. also,educational systems in several countrie...
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...n affects other children directly. also,educational systems in several countries are guilty...
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... systems in several countries are guilty,because they have significant impress on childr...
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...ficant impress on children.to iluustrate,teachers in schools,no matter which grade of sch...
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...ildren.to iluustrate,teachers in schools,no matter which grade of school,are not ta...
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... schools,no matter which grade of school,are not taught to be creative in their rout...
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...ght to be creative in their routine life,because of that reason they can not teach child...
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...ected directly by tchnology developement,because teachers also prefer to use ready equip...
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...ting new ideas or creating new things. generally,as far as i am concernd,technology deve...
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...ideas or creating new things. generally,as far as i am concernd,technology develop...
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...eating new things. generally,as far as i am concernd,technology developement hav...
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...ings. generally,as far as i am concernd,technology developement have very bad impacts on c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, while, for instance, i think, such as, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 22.412803532 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1373.03311258 153% => OK
No of words: 362.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79281767956 5.08290768461 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.01001558134 2.5805825403 155% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 145.348785872 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599447513812 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 419.366225166 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 1.25165562914 799% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 21.2450331126 339% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.540249149 49.2860985944 441% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 419.4 110.228320801 380% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.4 21.698381199 334% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.6 7.06452816374 377% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 48.0 4.19205298013 1145% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.0 13.3589403974 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.53 53.8541721854 -34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 5.55761589404 347% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.0289183223 306% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.49 12.2367328918 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.74 8.42419426049 139% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 63.6247240618 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 10.7273730684 587% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.498013245 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 11.2008830022 562% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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