You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or the company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain how this problem is affecting your work
Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the Sony headphones that I bought from your shop last Sunday. I purchased them during the sale period on the weekend, and after using them for a week, I found that the mic is not functioning properly. It starts and stops working intermittently and this is seriously impacting my office meetings.
I have been working from home for the last few months and therefore, I need to connect with my teammates multiple times a day. Since most of the meetings take place on Skype or Zoom, I have to connect headphones to my laptop to join the meetings. Thus, due to the improper working of the mic, my team members are unable to hear me, and a lot of time gets wasted in solving such issues.
Therefore, it is really important and urgent for me to get this fixed to work smoothly from home. As these headphones come with a 6-month warranty, I would like to get them replaced as early as possible. Please let me know when I can come to get these exchanged with a new one.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Heena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49748743719 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48890368425 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3188360392 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149366048736 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580314749416 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030817327809 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862212401764 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105928543308 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.