You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event.
Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter
- Explain why you are interested in helping
- Give details suitable past experiences
- Suggest ways you might help with the event
Dear Sir,
I am writing to let you know my interest in volunteering for the blood donation camp which is being held this Saturday at Avenue Parks.
I am a nurse and I meet lots of people as part of my work. Helping the needy is just what I do.The satisfaction and sense of fulfillment, I get from caring for others is reward-less
My name is Jim Carter and I am a part time nurse at Hillview Hospital. My phone number is 444888555 and aes@aae.com is my email id. I have been an active member in the YMCA, Ridge branch since 2010. I am also a member of Blood For Life. I have participated in 28 blood donation camps in and around Ridge County.
I know a lot of people who are willing to donate blood, which will surely make this event successful. Also, since I’m a nurse, I can help out with the medical procedures such as extracting blood samples, identifying blood groups and conducting basic tests before blood extraction.
Thank you and I hope to hear a favorable response at the earliest.
Yours faithfully
Jim Carter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...rk. Helping the needy is just what I do.The satisfaction and sense of fulfillment, ...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...less My name is Jim Carter and I am a part time nurse at Hillview Hospital. My...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ss My name is Jim Carter and I am a part time nurse at Hillview Hospital. My phone nu...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... I am also a member of Blood For Life. I have participated in 28 blood donation ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...on camps in and around Ridge County. I know a lot of people who are willing to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56382978723 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63934862398 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622340425532 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7408621002 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104320841712 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380204107568 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388222909942 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666017685503 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433733137258 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.