The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below provides the information regarding to population figures for India and China from 2000 and predicted population growth until 2050.

On the one hand, we can see from the graph that India is having gradual increase since 2000 to 2050. The starting point was at 1.0 Billions in 2000 , after that climbing slightly to 2025 and reach 1.4 Billions population. Furthermore, the graph keeps advancing until 2050 and finally reach the peak of 1.6 Billions inhabitants. In addition, we can see there are always approximately 25 until 100 millions increment.

On the other hand, India has slight rise until 2020s and slips back until 2050. The beginning point was at 1.25 Billions population in 2000, moreover, the graph has slight rise until reached the peak point in 2030 (1.45 Billions) at this period the graph from china and India are intercepting each other. Additionally, the graph slips back again and has several decrements to finally reach 1.4 Billions civilization in 2050.

Overall, India has more superiority in terms of growth population in 50 years ahead.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...arting point was at 1.0 Billions in 2000 , after that climbing slightly to 2025 an...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decrement seems to be countable; consider using: 'several decrements'.
Suggestion: several decrements
...ally, the graph slip back again and has several decrement to finally reach 1.4 Billions civilizat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, moreover, regarding, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10734463277 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62014666371 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536723163842 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.917909193 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313494685426 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146832289987 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144244013949 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249508420536 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162633532446 0.0819641961636 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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