Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Education plays an important role for improving the image of every nation. Majority of people opine that art is an essential subject for studying at childhood wheres others believe that it is only a wastage of time. I personally favour the former perspective; however, my essay shall dwell upon both the viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, some opponents consider art worth as they think art has no value in modern era. Children also have pressure of studying other subjects such as math, English, science, social studies and so on. If extra subject will be added then they may not be able to spend time with their parents and indulge in physical activities. Secondly, nowadays every work of art is done with the help of machines and artists are struggling to earn money on the basis of artistic skills. Art had lost its appearance two decade ago. For instance, in ancient time each person was expert in knitting, making boats on their own and clean water of river but now things are changed and machines take the place of human beings so that is why people believe that science, technology and commerce lead to shining and successful future.
On the other hand, art is an most fundamental subject to study at school because it provide relaxation to adolescents. In the modern time, youngsters are facing a stressful life. While doing art, they may get relief from busy life and also get proficiency in extra - curriculam activity. This will help them to stays away from jeopardized activities that is murder, robbery and drugs. For example, teenagers may take art as a hobby if they are interested in singing song and painting a picture etcetera. Furthermore, artistic skill is a better way to improve performance in school by joining art competition. It is not only help to improve performance in class but also increases interest in different area.
I believe that art should be compulsory subject in primary schools because at the tender age children can grasp art subject easily and get higher chances of successful outcomes at early age and they are the one who change the economy by innovative ideas.
In gist, I would like to assert that it should be upto the children to join art classes or not. As without attentiveness they may not learn art skills. Teachers and parents also have to motivate the children to choose art as a leisure activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89805825243 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61865945979 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5048527433 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285340953345 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766072421514 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690726872641 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153112918841 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395734973266 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.