In the past, it was unusual for most people to change careers more than once or twice. Now it is quite common for people to have had ten or more different jobs in their lifetimes.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a change?
With the existing of the Internet, people are easily finding a job just by clicking on job finder website. That lead people nowadays tent to change their job more frequently than they did in the past. Some people say it would bring drawbacks to people who are keeping renew their job for very short time. Others claim that it's fine for searching new jobs which suit them the best. From my point of view, this trending bring both advantages and disadvantages to society.
On the one hand, shifting work could bring some serious difficulties for people. Firstly, they need certain amount of time to adapt new environment and learn new skill for the work. Due to these requirements, new employees cannot work effective and would receive a lower salary. Secondly, some large companies have criteria in loyalty when evaluate their staff, which people prefer swapping their career cannot achieve, could cause them to be unemployed. They could acquire the unrespect from their co-worker and the reliability from their boss for promoting to higher status such as manager.
On the other hand, many opportunities are waiting for people who can flexibly adapt new task. One of that is finding the most suitable for their abilities which is very crucial if they are businessmen. For instance, due to Covid-19 wearing industry stuck in the mud and many companies are in bankrupt. Some of them transfer their operation from making clothes to making mask with protective gear and save their business. Moreover, part-time job could bring them more experience when they are young. These knowledge could help them solve many problems when they are mature and in the most suitable field of work.
In conclusion, there are both good and bad perspective exist parallelly together. Changing job frequently assist people find out what is the best for them and not miss that golden moment although steady career would bring them higher status and income. Wisely choose base on age, abilities and interests will make people achieve the best result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'These knowledges'?
Suggestion: This knowledge; These knowledges
...em more experience when they are young. These knowledge could help them solve many problems whe...
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Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to base'
Suggestion: to base
...higher status and income. Wisely choose base on age, abilities and interests will ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03273809524 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40716044633 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565476190476 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2864156029 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282253755522 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859203837073 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697730068163 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180968717585 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710618738316 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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