The diagram below shows the production of ethanol oil from grain. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives us information about how ethanol oil is made from grain.
Starting the process, the grain is harvested by the farmers and being stored in the storage. At the next stage, the grain after stored in the storehouse for a time, people take it to the mill to crush into smaller size powder. Afterward, that powder is move to the next step which is cooking stage to cook the grain. After cooked, the product is transfer to liquefaction stage which make solid state product to the liquid product. After liquify, it is being fermented in the fermenting machine for chemistry transformation. The fermented product is moved to distillation step. In this stage the fluid is separated into 2 kinds of product, one is ethanol fuel and another is solids which is wet distillers grain. The ethanol fuel is being storage in tanks and then shipping to customers for using. The solids are brought to the dryer to transform to dry distillers grain Then it is being ship to the market.
Overall, moving through 12 stages, the grain is altered to ethanol fuel and dry distillers grain (DDG).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'distillers'' or 'distiller's'?
Suggestion: distillers'; distiller's
...rought to the dryer to transform to dry distillers grain Then it is being ship to the mar...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to dry distillers grain Then it is being ship to the market. Overall, moving thr...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'distillers'' or 'distiller's'?
Suggestion: distillers'; distiller's
...rain is altered to ethanol fuel and dry distillers grain DDG.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75661375661 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5352253657 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2350547362 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.7272727273 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186919158955 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774977382655 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727007310906 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166128753408 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781067116501 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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