People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialsm. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
In the materialistic society, people's demands are increasing by leaps and bounds, so that they do hard work to fulfil their desires. No doubt that it has made our life comfortable but due to such materialsm people have lost their traditional values and customs. I mostly agree with the statement that conventional beliefs are getting disappeared because of giving importance to unnecessary things.
To begin with, in the contemporary era masses do hardwork to accomplish their goals because of that they always indulge in their work. As a result, they do not find enough time to spend with their friends and family. Sometime they face conflict as they have no mutual understanding. For instance, nowadays there are so much dispute happens among majority of family members that they easily decided to apart and stay alone. In various countries, this trend is common. The main reason of this problem is unhealthy relationship. Secondly, people thinking are altered according to environment and they think if they do not buy expensive gadgets and follow latest fashion then they shall not be treated in social circle.
Moreover, the second main reason is that if masses do not take part in festival and in tradition then they may not be able to learn the history of their nation. For example, the times of india study reveal that about 60 percent children and adults do not know about their country national animal and independence day. so, it is very significant to learn traditional values.
On the other hand, due to modernisation in technology people life is easier and comfortable. In modern era, machines take the place of human in every field whether to teach students, cook food and in hospital . Because of invention in technology every work is done in few seconds and work is also completed accurately.
In gist, I would like to assert that for living work is vital but person have to balance their personal and professional life so that they do not lost their traditional values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98502994012 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68549564038 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6841623587 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9411764706 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200824436265 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658383113211 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693974908392 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120329310759 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887709451349 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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