Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read.
You should include
Describe the book.
How it can help him/her?
Where can he get it from?
Dear Tim,
How’s it going? it’s been so long since we last talked to each other. Well, I’m writing to let you know about a wonderful book that would help you to move on in life. I know it’s hard to let go of the bad memories but reading this book would benefit you a lot.
The book’s title is “A Monk who sold his Ferrari”. From the title, it might sound just like fantasy fiction, but in reality, it’s a self-help book and the author is none other than the prominent Robin Sharma. The book consists of 7 chapters and is about a criminal lawyer who transformed into a monk after surviving a major heart attack in a courtroom.
As a person who is struggling with the vicious memories of your abusive relationship, this book would definitely help you to look at the bright side of life.
The 7 principles of life that have been described in the book are going to quite relevant to all of us. After reading it, you will get a new outlook that might help you to start over again and be as alive as you were once.
In terms of procurement, you have two options; either you can buy a digitised copy of the literature or can opt for a physical one from Amazon.com. Either way, you won’t be disappointed reading it.
Hope to see you in great spirits again.
Keep in touch,
Alex
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Tim, How’s it going? it’s been so long since we last talked to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43153526971 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3981607709 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614107883817 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5027926139 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2857142857 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379862257896 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111175259059 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073938687622 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176488282162 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724463282419 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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