The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of males and females aged from 15 to 65 years and over doing physical exercise on a regular basis in Australia in 2010.
Overall, there are six age-groups where all women were as much active as men, but for 15-24 age-group, the reverse was true.
To begin, nearly 49% of women involved in physical training in their 25-34 years compared to men with just over 42%. Similarly, over a half of middle-aged Australian women kept active lifestyle. Interestingly, there was the highest percentage of active women aged 35-54, 52.5%, 53.3%, and 53%, respectively. However, the figures for the-same-aged men ranged from 39% to 45%. Nevertheless, there was a slight difference in share of women and men doing physical activity, 47.1% and 46.7% in turn. On the other hand, among young adults aged between 15 and 24 year olds, a slight more men (52.8%) were active than women (47.7%).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05917159763 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75205821994 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644970414201 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9034293931 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342038572962 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130755270219 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610340320283 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165500273356 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103649549921 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.