It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use teach good behaviour to children?
Nowadays, more and more people concentrate on to their children’s upbringing. Some argue that it is vital for children to differ white from black from childhood. In addition, they believe punishment is the best solution for children to learn this distinction. I partly agree with this opinion, and in this essay I will discuss the type of punishment performed by parents and teachers that are able to improving positive character of children and give some examples.
Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of punishing children. The main advantaged of children punishment could be explanation that their behavior is absurd. Followed by the punishment help them to comprehend why they are directed to the right way by teachers and parents. It is important from an early stage as adolescents’ character is out of control.
Secondly, numerous children are in unsafety environment, perhaps, being spoiled until fifteen-year is as easy as falling off a log. Malicious individuals could blame their mind, thereby teachers and parents should verify their children whether they attend at school. If teacher consider that schoolboy behavior is unsatisfied, probably, they are forced to stay at the angle of a classroom instead of explaining the reason of punishment. In many circumstances it enhancing of vandalism and violent character due to the they are not able to distinct right and wrong things.
Conversely, in many countries punishment methods might be both verbal and corporal. A plethora of schoolboys complain to their psychologists that teachers and parents frequently offend them by using physical punishment. As a result, children might be aggressive due to this. It used to in history, however, today by hitting children adults would be accused and also in prison.
To sum up, offspring penalizing should have restriction. The optimal solution for correcting children behavior to the right side is sincere talks. In my view, parents and teachers nurture young generation with passion and politeness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, in addition, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40063091483 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04633877305 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567823343849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5009510498 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1052631579 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282235839824 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813435172458 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649097509995 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147991233502 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751683164621 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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