Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think that the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh disadvantageous.
To get entry in museums is often chargeable these days, while few others exempt entry fees. I do believe that taking charge ought to be mandatory for museums, in order to maintain museums. This essay intends to examine both parameters with suitable examples.
Charging people in order to get entry in museums is necessary because of maintenance and security purposes as well as to give better services for tourist. This money could also be use used for expansion purposes for instance Jaipur Wax museum is renowned for their services and 2 to 3 wax statues are being added in museums each year which leads people to make their interest. Moreover, charging people may help to make healthy environment otherwise this will lead youngsters to use it for their amusement and this will bring negative impact on tourist and local people.
However, in contrast, masses that are hardly able to manage their livelihood, would not think to visit at chargeable place and as a result people will be unfamiliar with their culture and traditions. Furthermore, few museums might charge more money intends to make this as an earning source and as a result this will reduce the frequency of people visiting there or sometimes they may avoid visiting there.
To conclude, it is an inevitable truth that providing cost free services may lead to offer poor services and unhealthy environment which may reduce counts of tourist; however, while imposing extra charge would lead to people rest unaware with their culture and traditions and might consider it as a source of income which affects the image of museum as a social heritage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
To get entry in museums often use to be chargeable these days, while many...
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Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...healthy environment otherwise this will leads youngsters to use it for their amusemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in contrast, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97794117647 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50094056701 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.6320004798 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.444444444 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265778590554 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1133314198 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605111308694 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156662886663 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05721511251 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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