Difference between countries become less evident each year, Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this?
This is the sign of globalization that the various factors like fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and tv channels are found to be quiet similar these days. This leads people to cross the leap and boundaries and to accept the global culture however, this has own impacts on human being . This essay will bring a familiar note about the advantages and disadvantages where advantages have more weight rather than disadvantages.
Firstly,21st Century going to be remarkable to bring a tremendous change in Indian history where number of MoU signed for well being of nation to take future into consideration. Though, People are welcoming the international culture widely for instance apparel brands Gucci, Van-husen, palatable foods like Dominos, MacDonald’s are on high street. Moreover people love to listen and watch various overseas podcast, songs and news channel and live telecast. Hollywood movies are the cup of tea of most teenagers. In order that this helps people to showcase their talent at international level and helps them who want to study abroad or immigrate for job because they don’t take more time as they are already familiar to it.
secondly, to take another side into consideration this has some adverse effect over population for instance people starts avoiding to follow their own culture and starts accepting overseas culture rather than to think about their consequences. In order to conquer their culture they starts consuming junk food which brings a negative impact on body of individual.
Finally, to sum up the writing this can be said that the acceptance should be treated to an extent and people should not forget their culture and tradition in order to get an international culture and tradition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23571428571 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76673398341 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6440455233 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.272727273 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120228133902 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478905829731 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393299171317 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750239492425 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549462185246 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.