In many countries, the level of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? What can we deal with those causes?
Addressing soaring crime rates has been cited as among major issues requiring the government to impose strict measures to confront. This essay will examine the culprits and propose several ways to tackle the described problem above.
To begin with, there is a plethora of compelling reasons attributed to the increase in the number of crime rates. In practice, severe poverty in less developed countries might deteriorate crime-related cases. Take India as a prime example, millions of unemployed people in economically disadvantaged areas are suffering from starvation, which, in turn, drives them to commit a crime such as a robbery to retain their daily lives. Additionally, given punishments to the accused in both developing and affluent countries tend to be eased gradually. The trial these days is striving for seeking extenuating circumstances for those who break the law for the sake of mirroring humanity of the law, which will exacerbate criminals in society, including identity theft and other adverse offences.
Although crime rates are increasing sharply in some countries, there are several possible solutions which could solve the aforementioned matter. One of the most effective ways forward is to ensure job security to those with inherited disadvantages. Employing blue-collar workers from disadvantaged homes to work on the farm will not only ease their financial burdens but also eradicate starvation in the globe, which is likely to hinder people from law contravention. Another possible measure to curb crime rates is to educate citizens about the grave consequences of criminals to their families and society. Vietnam, for instance, the increase in orphanage children stemmed from law infringement by their parents exerts severe pressure on the national budget, which will slow the economy and contribute to the increase in break homes.
In conclusion, it is challenging for governments to steer the economy without criminals; however, crime rates could be reduced by implementing the mentioned solutions above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5608974359 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97312743901 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7264081662 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.461538462 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133926908854 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529582463053 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393750570056 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755897189956 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322404671607 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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