some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Over the past few decades, the advancements in the field of science and research are undoubtedly remarkable. Whilst some argue using rats, monkeys, and other living creatures is very in-humane unlike others continue to do so. In this following essay, I will outline the reasons behind these experiments and animal abuse.
In these modern days, the advent of new products into the market including cosmetics, perfumes, insecticides, and many more for human survival with ease is commonly observed. Many individuals like zoophilists argue and are against this act but unfortunately, the experiments cannot be made without testing it on animals first, and have no alternative before launching in the markets. For instance, pest control can be manufactured after making a trial on that particular species, if that species is dead it is an actual result of these insecticides. We, humans, do buy such products to our safety without having any other thoughts until there is a demand for such items that arise the supply.
On the flip side, how are the pests or any species invading our personal spaces? It's obviously clear because we are encroaching their spaces and they have nowhere to live but tress-pass our limits. Ultimately, having held the responsibility of this demand and the creation of such product animal exploitation will be common, unless, efforts are made to find an alternative technology or any robotics means to trial first. With globalization, everything is possible why not an alternative invention and stop killing animals? We must first stop to have these demands of a range of cosmetics and several products.
To conclude, innocent animal exploitation will be continued until the efforts are made to find a solid cutting edge alternative for user testing. Consequently, avoiding afforestation with fewer demands may help for the future creation of the products will be drastically reduced make a harmonic approach to tackle these issues.
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- some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed However others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments Can experimentation on animals be justified Are there any alternatives 84
- Some people think that in order to produce a happy society it is necessary to ensure that there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and poorest To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ur personal spaces? Its obviously clear because of the fact that we are encroaching their spaces and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2523659306 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9051315684 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615141955836 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7565155498 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219319938083 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721852046843 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651482030415 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133301213943 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01732394844 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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