Many people think that modern day parents are more over-protective than parents from the past.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words.
The given statement is quite right that in today's world, parents are becoming more protective for their children whereas this was not the scenario in the past. This over-protective nature is not only oriented towards academics rather in other fields too. Accordingly, I am completely in favour of the mentioned view point.
To begin with, the primary reason behind this is that in ancient times, generally people were having many kids. Infact, five kids were normally seen in any family. For instance, my grandparents were having seven children. But nowadays, situation is completely different. Modern parents believe in having one or two kids only so due to less children, whole attention is automatically roam around them. Moreover, in yesteryears, crimes were negligible, child exploitation was not there. Kids used to freely play outside their houses but now these days people have become so cruel. Almost everyday we hear about rape news of small children. Therefore, the parents have become more concerned about their children.
Furthermore, today's generation is very aggressive. They take decisions in very hasty manner without knowing about their repercussions. So, the parents should always remain by their side to guide them on correct time. Besides, modern generation is more vulnerable to offensive activities. They have an easy access of mobile phones and internet, wrong usage of which may ruin their future. In addition to this, in today's competitive world, children have to face competition at each level, they do not feel isolated so it becomes their parents responsibility to stay alert and do proper supervision of their kids.
To recapitulate, having an over-protective nature is not an offence rather it is a blessing for children. There are several children in this world, who feel lack of support or attention of their parents so if someone is getting it there is no harm of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun children is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...n having one or two kids only so due to less children, whole attention is automatica...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'roamed'.
Suggestion: roamed
...ldren, whole attention is automatically roam around them. Moreover, in yesteryears, ...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...able to offensive activities. They have an easy access of mobile phones and internet, wrong us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23778501629 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83096934292 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4246096034 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.35 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153172422924 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459202643609 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404860767199 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104010595884 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323532890979 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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